Letter to help our high school
Bailey Bridge, 100 meters to the southwest
Colegio Serafico San Francisco
May 29th of the 2021
Dear Sir:
In my high school, there is a lot of potencial in every student, for example, making sculptures.
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| Sculpture made by students |
But sadly, many of these sculptures have to be taken to the houses of the respective students. So I have an idea for the students and their art, a sculpture garden!
I think this help would make a lot of art public, and show the potencial of our students.
So, in this letter, I want to ask for help in the making of the sculpture garden, sending us a donation of ₡600,000.
I hope that you can help us.
In my high school, there is a lot of potencial in every student, for example, making sculptures. --> This sentence requires that you explain more about the potential of every student. At least you must state which type of potencial are you refering about.
ResponderEliminarWhen you state the following idea
"for help in the making of the sculpture garden, sending us a donation of ₡600,000.
I hope that you can help us."
You must write it in a different way.For instance, to help in the construction of the sculptrue garden, there is one idea which is donations"---> Notice that if you explain your idea in a better way, maybe people could help you.
You got a grade of 80.
In another entry you must improve your writing.